Sunday, November 8, 2009
Optional SDHW Practice
2. Town mayor Tom named Bessy the winner.
3. Jim and I quickly ran down the hill, through the words, and into my house.
4. Gilbert seems nervous about his decision.
5. The upset policemen walked the suspect and her dog home.
6. How can you give Austin your brand new sportscar for his birthday?
7. Who let the dogs out?
8. Sentence Diagramming is fun for everyone.
9. We should appoint Jim chairman or secretary.
10. Later I will give a prepared speech on crime and a freestyle about justice.
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
SDHW 10
2. The big and fast linemen were rushing the passer regularly and effectively.
3. The money was divided between Peter and the sergeant,
4. The truck rolled off the bridge and sank into the water.
5. You must give Mike the letter about his expulsion.
6. I consider basebal America's pastime.
7. Can you show me the road to Montrose?
8. My friend Matt made Jonas and Jill a beautiful birthday cake with chocolate sprinkles.
9. After the performance the judge declared Suzy the winner.
Sunday, November 1, 2009
SDHW9
2. Jimmy chased the mouse behind the barn, under the floorboards, and through the cellar.
3. Roger and Nathan solemly declared the clumsy and dull unicorn deceased.
4. The magnificent Marta and fantastic Yayoi gave Jones their final essay tests before the end of class.
5. how many people think they can diagram this sentence without a single mistake?
Tuesday, October 27, 2009
SDHW8
1. During her first week at college Lucy dyed her hair bright orange.
2. Must I give you my answers before the end of the week.
3. I consider his actions a disgrace to the school.
4. Perhaps the foreman of the night crew will grant you your request.
5, Nathan named Hannah and Molly co-presidents.
6. I will send you my complete itinerary for my European trip.
7. How many pages did old Thatcher assign us for tomorrow?
8. Jones and Wellman give students homework and quizzes.
Monday, October 26, 2009
SDHW7
1. The old man told us several unbelievable stories.
2. The class of 1963 might elect you president.
3. You give me one good reason for your refusal.
4. Her grandfather will probably leave her a sizable fortune.
5. Someone must have left the door open.
6. The Larsens named their first son Otto.
7. Can you make me a set of seat covers for my car by tomorrow afternoon?
Thursday, October 22, 2009
3rd period homework
Considering I didn't put these up until almost 7, you only need to choose 5 to rewrite. It is important that you do them since they will be collected first thing tomorrow. Tell your friends.
Mitchell
Although professional sports are a fun and entertaining part of many people’s lives, professional athletes are undeserving of their recession proof salaries that are higher than those of important government officials and the military.
Sarah Israel- Assisted Suicide
Legalizing euthanasia allows terminally ill patients the right to end their suffering and permits a dignified death.
Emy Ludwig- Student athletes should be drug tested
I think students athletes should be drug tested because it will encourage them to stay away from drugs and get help if they have a problem, it will keep their lives healthy, and also keep competition among athletes level.
Shelby- Physical Education Should Be Mandatory in Schools
Physical education in school should be mandatory because it supports a normal weight, maintains a healthy internal structure, and helps prevent and/or delay the occurrence of common illnesses.
Mal Bosse-Being a meat eater is healthier than being a vegetarian
The average human needs to eat meat because they will have the best nutrition possible, save money, and follow in the footsteps of some famous athletes.
Jacqueline Child- lowering the drinking age to 18.
If one can go to war, vote, attend college, drive a car, and marry at the age of 18, an 18 year old should be permitted to legal drinking.
Fischer Hazen- Withdrawal from the Iraq war
The United States needs to pull out of the Iraq war now. This occupation has caused immense hardship for innocent civilians, used billions of dollars, and forced terrorist organizations to expand.
Jessi Solomon- Tobacco and Cigarette Funding Healthcare
Although the cigarette and tobacco industry’s products are the cause of more preventable deaths in the United States than any other institution’s, cigarette companies should use their billions of dollars that they gross each ear to take responsibility for destroying the lungs and circulatory system of its customers.
Cale Cramer- Keep downloading music for free illegal
Although buying music from iTunes costs about $1.29 a song, downloading music illegally should continue to stay illegal because it takes away from the economy, can cost you thousands of dollars, and can possibly crash your harddrive.
Nate Mcclun Sun-
Abortion is one of the most evil acts committed today, killing forty two million children every year, almost 3 times the deathtoll of the holocaust
2nd period
Considering I didn't put these up until almost 7, you only need to choose 5 to rewrite. It is important that you do them since they will be collected first thing tomorrow. Tell your friends.
Emily
Although, professional sports generate high revenues to support astronomical spending, professional athlete salaries drive high-ticket prices, exceed that of important government officials, and create a false sense of superiority.
Sonja
Although funding the NASA space program exceeds 16 billion dollars a year for the US, our daily lives are affected by their discoveries.
Olivia
In order to be more successful in the future, all high school students should be given individual laptops.
Maddie is da bomb
Although many types of processed foods can be ok for you, organic food is much healthier and better for humans to eat.
Lauren
Although television plays an important role in an average American’s life every day, it has a negative effect on a society because of the influence it has on our minds.
Hannah Banana
Do to the competitive nature of sports, athletes are tempted to use illegal performance enhancing drugs.
NAOMI!!!!
File sharing programs such s Limewire allow for illegal downloading while harming your computer and the music industry at large.
The life of several human children massacred, these babies that was aborted didn’t have the choice neither should you.-Genevieve
Luis T.
A lot of people think gta 4 is the worse game ever made in the history because it is really violent.
Austin
It is extremely important that we don’t let endangered species become extinct because we are the ones making them extinct.
Ryan Parkinson
Barack Obama recently won the Nobel peace prize but did not deserve it because he has yet to implement something beneficial to our country.
Carla Stauder
Having an extra period for study hall would benefit each student tremendously
Sunday, October 4, 2009
Scopes Satire
Friday, October 2, 2009
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SAtire
Satire...
“Bert, whenever you see something bright, shining, perfect-seeming. look behind the paint! And if it's a lie-show it up for what it really is! -Acts III, Sc. 1”This satirical article is seemed very sarcastic and foolish, which is the definition of satire. One part of the article said that we shouldn't have to be taught math if we are going to work in an iron factory our whole life. This seems foolish to me and silly that someone could think that we should only be taught what we are going to do in the future. If we want out societies to be well rounded and everyone to be smart then this idea is bogus. In this article the sarcasm never stop. Also they say that people should not go to school because all they teach is facts. Facts are one of the main things in school. However i think this idea is just silly and i'm glad this is not how our society is today!
Thursday, October 1, 2009
satire
Ha satire...
SATIRE IN THE ONION!!!!
Emys Satire HW
Science Eliminated From Schools?
The satire arguing that science should be eliminated from the school systems because it is simply filling the children’s minds with useless fact that will never be used. Obviously this is not true, because with out the basic information on science, which is involved in almost everything and even in many careers, we would lose all of the hard work that our ancestors have worked so hard to gain and would have to again start from the past. This hard work is the result of our modern world and without it, we would be living in the past. Without these new inventions, the things we take for granted, would not be possible to do so easily. The author also mentions the low paying jobs, usually for the lowerclassmen, that everyone who does not get an education and learns about science have. However, with a proper education, these people would get higher paying jobs, possibly produce more scientists and mathematicians, and invent modern technology that eliminates the dirty jobs that no body really wants.
Satire
How there is an ape on the stand and how it is ridicule show they were talking about eating babies and how the world would decrease and we would have more clothing and. They also call the ape to the stand and the ape is talking about how humans came from monkeys. The bible also doesn’t mention Cornelius at all.
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Satire Homework
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Wed. hw. satire
KULANI IS CRYING... bahahah
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
satire
#2. This is a satire because everything that is talked about is practical but ridiculous. Nothing that is talked about would really happen unless the people went mad. The author uses humor in the story to change it or have people think differently or change sides.
Inherit the Wind Ending
Ending of "Inherit the Wind"
Inherit the Wind: Act Three
Inherit the wind is a moving story that shows how a small towns court case can catch the entire countries interest. It follows the controversial case of Bertram Cates (John T. Scopes,) who violated the law by teaching the theory of evolution. I believe that the recurring idea of thinking for yourself is one of the most important things one could ever learn, and that is exactly what this case brings to the people of Hillsboro. The end of the play brings an unexpected twist. Drummond changes the people of Hillsboro and gains their support. When this happens, Brady loses it, and then ends up dying. The jury finds Cates guilty and he is fined 100 dollars. This final decision is so shocking, especially after most everyone switches sides from Brady to Drummond. I find the end of the play a slight let down compared to the rest of the book and does not live up to the build up the beginning gives it, but it shows that not everything happens as you, or everyone else would like it to. I also felt that the book as a whole lacked a certain depth that you find in other books, but is well written.
Satire 2
It is funny how this guy is talking about not teaching children the one thing that is true which are facts. We base most of everything off facts and this guy is saying that the basic jobs in the world won’t need to know facts. This is ironic because we go to school and get an education in order to learn facts and the truth. This guy is also saying that we should listen to what we are told and be content with it. That goes against the truth of an open mind and freedom to think and ask questions. It also talks about how we are taught math or science but would we really need to know this for the certain job we want. It’s ironic because we go to school to learn all of this, science math English and all but do we really need to know this? He’s question whether or not a fact is something we need or something useless.
Satire 1
In the reading Bryan justifies his reasoning on how evolution is wrong by going back to his usual ways which are the bible. He doesn’t take the time to see what is in front of him and how ridiculous it truly is. There is an ape on the stand telling everyone that he is from the future and that in the future apes will be ruling the world. Brady blows this off and refers back to the bible and how because the bible doesn’t say apes will take over then apes won’t be taking over. He thinks that only what the bible says will happen and is true.
How can satire be used to persuade people?
It can be used to persuade people by showing them different sides of a story or situation. It gives you examples of the element of ridiculousness and the element of practicality. For example the man who wrote about eating babies to keep from overpopulation was a satire. It may sound ridiculous but if you were to eat babies the population wouldn’t be over populated so it’s actually reasonable.
ITW Ending
Onion Satire
act 3
Satire
ITW
Wednesday Assignments
http://www.law.umkc.edu/faculty/projects/ftrials/scopes/scopes2.htm
Part II: Choose a quotes from the book and represent its idea visually. YOU MUST CHECK WITH Mr. Jones first to have yoir quote and image approved.
Part III: Read the following article and duscuss the elements of satire your find.
http://www.law.umkc.edu/faculty/projects/ftrials/scopes/onionOpinion.htm
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inherit the wind
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Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Inherit the wind
Inherit the Wind
Inherit the Wind
Act 3 Ending
Inherit the Wind
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Inherit the Wind
I throughly enjoyed reading Inherit the Wind. It was a very interesting read with both a religious and scientific point of view. The way it was written was very clever in the sense that the author made you want to be one the side or the other in the court case but he didn’t insert his own opinion into the book. The author built up a very good personality for each individual character and was able to give you a sense of who the person was. I like how at the end of the book that even though Cates and Drummond lost the case they turned it into a positive and mad it a somewhat happy ending with the exception of Brady dying. The only thing that I didn’t like in the book was that you didn’t know what parts were fact and which parts were fiction.
The Trial
Inherit the Wind
Friday, September 25, 2009
Quiz
Diagram the Following Sentences
1. Our car is parked across the street.
2. A play about Cleopatra and Tut will show tonight.
3. The plan with only one engine should have landed on the slippery runway.
4. Jack and Jill went up the hill.
5. Mr. Jones teaches English.
Inherit the Wind: Short Answer
1. Describe how Drummond and Cates are bound by more than just the court case.
2. Describe why the town is on trial itself.
3. Describe the relationship between Rachel and her father, making at least one reference to the text.
4. Pick one of the six themes and discuss how it relates to Act I.
5. Explain why the town seems like a “county fair,” and how this atmosphere impacts the town.
6. Explain the significance of the following quote (both its meaning in the novel and life in general) “He who troubleth his own house will inherit the wind.”
7. Discuss 2 persuasive techniques used in the first or second Act and comment on their effectiveness.
8. Write the real life counterparts for the following characters: Henry Drummond, Mathew Harrison Brady, and Bertram Cates.
Sunday, September 20, 2009
SDHW5
1. The judge put off the trial until a much later date.
2. Your letter should have mentioned the change in plans.
3. The early settlers in the West have left vivid accounts of their hardships.
4. The teacher was obviously getting weary of Jimmy’s mischievous pranks.
5. Jeremy and I are going under the house and around the cellar.
6. You enjoy the remainder of the weekend.
Sorry for the delay.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
SDHW4
1. The bulky old law books were stored in the basement.
2. My car has become my greatest expense.
3. Several California trains were delayed by a flood in Nebraska.
4. Every policemen and every firefighter ran into the station.
5. Jenkins became district manager for his company during his tenure.
6. The governor of the province later repealed three of the laws.
7. Two unsuccessful rescue attempts have already been made.
8. Three very old men walked slowly to the end of the dock.
9. The two younger sons soon squandered their portion of the father’s estate.
10. During the next month the tempo of life in our little village increased noticeably.
Monday, September 14, 2009
SDHW3
Diagram the sentences and then label the Predicate nominative, adjective or Direct Object, as well as the verb tense and form.
1. We are planning a vacation trip.
2. The adorably cute puppy and the obnoxious cat have been playing tag.
3. Austin seems unusual and perturbed.
4. Jessi stood and glared.
5. Studious Riggs passed his test.
6. Billy and Sally are curious people.
7. Jane is sad.
8. Fearful Frank and suspicious Susan are creeping home.
Friday, September 11, 2009
Sentence Diagramming Homework
1. Happy Molly is skipping.
2. George is curious.
3. Austin left Texas.
4. Dirk seems extremely tired.
5. Anne and Andy are raggedy.
6. The dark, mysterious man entered the dangerous bar.
7. The tiny yellow ducklings seem content.
8. The tortoise and the confident hair are running the course.
9. Roge4r shouted and blamed Garret.
10. My sister and I like candy and soda.
11. The Indigo snake is large and shiny.
12. Few turtles and frogs are dangerous
13. My crazy aunt Bertha made pepperoni and mushroom pizza.
14. Spontaneously ridiculous Steve seemed unusually shy.
15. Undecided Margaret tossed and turned the idea.
Wednesday, September 9, 2009
gods enduring days
Emy's Thoughts! :)
Book of Genesis
One of my earliest memories of playing with my friends when I was little was going to church with them, but I was not listening to the prayers being said, or the excerpts from the bible, I was drawing. Those were the only times I have ever been to church and I can now say that I am very opinionated about religion. I do not believe in any religion, but prefer to make my own so call religion or belief system, based on what I truly believe. I can easily see how people believe the stories from the bible, probably from just growing up hearing them and being told what the correct thing to believe in is.
In the Book of Genesis, the word choice again tells you that this is the way that it is and the only way because “it was so” and “God saw that it was good.” It also states that men were superior to women (“…because she was taken out of Man”) and that it is a “man and his wife,” never a woman and her husband. I believe that it is this book that kept women back so much throughout history. In terms of the teaching of evolution, it is unjust for a judge to base an entire court case on a book from the bible in a country where we try to separate church from state. In my opinion, the judge needed to thoroughly listen to both sides and not make his decisions around his beliefs, but in the beliefs of everyone in the state.
Thoughts of Genesis
Blogger on Genesis 1 2 3
The treatment of woman in this reading was very low. To take woman and say that they were made and taken from men therefore they are woman is ridiculous. I feel like in this reading they make men seem much more important then woman which I disagree with because woman and men should be equal. It also makes men look more mighty and powerful then women which is not true in all cases. Also in Genesis 3 the woman is the one who takes the fruit and gives it unto her husband. It makes women seem as if they are not as intelligent because the woman was the one who took the fruit after being tricked. Then the book says that the man shall rule over the woman because of her one mistake and I think that’s too quick to give the power all to the man when he too made a mistake.
When the judges choose this piece I don’t think he was thinking about the complexion of it. He chose a very simple and bland written piece. It did though talk about what at that time the government and the law stated was how the world was created and started. So I do think that it was appropriate for the judge to choose that exact book section to present in court.
Genesis
On the other hand, this piece of writing is very male dominate. I do not like how it states that God creates man in his own image, and he does it before he creates anything else. This makes me so mad that man is the first thing, before a women. Also, a quote from verse 23 states "she shall be called Woman, because she was taken out of Man." This makes it seem like women are equivalent to dogs by saying she shall be called, and it puts women a lower level instead of having men and women be equal.
In addition, i feel very ashamed about the idea of a Judge using the Genesis in a court room. Only because i feel teachers should teach both ideas, then the kids can pick what they want to believe in. Instead of teaching one idea that might not be true. On the Hole, everyone ideas are different about this topic, however i believe the Genesis is a important part of history that shows a different view on how everything was created.
Books one and two of Genesis. ::]
Genesis Thoughts
Blogger on Genesis
The treatment of woman in this reading was very low. To take woman and say that they were made and taken from men therefore they are woman is ridiculous. I feel like in this reading they make men seem much more important then woman which I disagree with because woman and men should be equal.
I feel that the judge using such a poorly written piece in court was rather idiotic. It was although, the best piece from the bible to use in court as why to not teach evolution because it talked about how the beginning of people and the world started. Evolution does that as well.
Genesis
Genesis
Genesis Blog
In the book of Genesis 1 and 2 tells you about what happened when God created the earth. I believe that he did create the earth in his own image and I have read this story before. This story is an old fashion type of writing. It says that God created man in his own image “after our likeness”. When God creates the earth, animals and sea he is repeating and it was good and it was so, what was good what was so. It also seems that ever time it refers it a person it refers to man not woman. It also says that man should rule over the animals and everything living and that woman should just be the ones to replenish the earth. The book of Genesis can help for some things but if there is nothing to back it up it doesn’t make sense to me.
In Genesis 3 God tells the women first not to eat the fruit and then tells the man, and if they eat from the tree "lest ye die". That really depicts women saying that God had to tell them frist because he knows that she will eat the forbiden fruit. Which she does. After Eve gives the fruit to Adam they relaize that they are naked and now care about there appearance. God comes into the graden of Edan and both Adam and Eve hide because they are naked now and are afraid now. But before Eve ate the apple she was not afraid of God. Also God gives Eve pain and tells he that when she has a baby she will feel pain, God doesnt do anything to Adam. So God pretty much said that now you have sinned, you may kill and be clothed in animal pelts and he is saying that men will be the stronger ones and be more powerful than everything.
teh book of Genesis
Genesis
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Genesis: Creation vs. Evolution
Another thing that I have thought about from reading this verse from the bible is specifically about the creation of man and woman. Just because woman was created out of man does not make her any lesser. People would not exist without both parts of creation. The one thing that I think is a true statement is the fact that when everything was done, and the world was populated, God sat back and saw that it was good. I think, despite the many flaws, our world is good.
After thoughts:
After reading the Genesis 3, I have noticed that it is written in old English style. Although this can seem more challenging, it is all so simple. I think that was one of the goals when the book of Genesis was written; to be an easy read so that anyone of any age can understand it. Genesis 3 also depicts more of the Bible's view on women. "He shall rule over thee", Genesis 3:16 describes how women are the lesser part of creation, which is simply not true. For a document to be used in court, I believe that it has to be 100% fact, but the theory of creation is'nt because in todays modern world a woman can have just as much power as men.
Genesis
Genesis
In addition, I do not like how man is considered superior. The passage states that God creates man in his own image, and he does so before he creates anything else. The quote, “She shall be called Woman, because she was taken out of man,” angers me. It is saying that the woman was created merely to keep the man company and reproduce. By saying that “she was taken out of man,” it implies that the woman is lower, not equal.
Preposterous is the word that comes to mind when I think of a judge using this piece in court. First of all, it is about a religion, which means that it is mostly ideas. I am not saying that those ideas are not true, but since I for one am not a Christian, these ideas sound ridiculous to me. No one has proved that God created everything around us, and since science has come into play, it is getting very unlikely.
Genesis Blog
The treatment of women is kinda how you interpret it. You could think that the bible is dissing on women saying that without man woman could not have been conceived. Or you could look at it like, man needs woman so that he won't be lonely because it says, "It is not good that the man should be alone." And the reason that many women were looked on as inferior was due to lack of education. Until 1534 the bible was only printed in one language, Hebrew, and the only people who could read it was the Pope, Cardinals, and some highly educated scholoars. Then Martin Luther translated it from Hebrew into German and then the common German could read the Bible.
I do not feel that a Judge could use this document in a court setting. This country is founded on the freedom of Religion. Now if we had a required Religion the Judge could totally be able to have this as a ligament document in court.
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Genesis Post
Genesis 1/2/3
In the book of Genesis one and two they used the same saying to separate the days. “And the evening and the morning” that quote is used seven times in Genesis one and two. The sentences were worded a little differently and it makes it confusing to understand at some times.
I never thought about how women were treated until Genesis 2:23 when Adam said “she shall be called Woman, because she was taken out of Man.” That was the only part that stuck out to me about how women were made of men and are a lesser part of society.
In the third book of Genesis they use a lot confusing words and sentences. Also they blame everything on the women like why
they ate from the tree and why they are now wearing clothes.
In my opinion this should not be used in a court case because there are no real facts that any of this happened. With evolution
there is a lot more proof that it actually has happened.
Thoughts on Genesis 1 and 2
Genesis Thoughts
Genesis in schools?
God made Eve out of Adam. He made her after him, i think many people interpreted this in saying women are below men. This took a change in society. Men became the top of the food chain. They pretty much owned their wives and treated them not too great. In Genesis, it starts to take over this idea. Also, Eve did the first wrong doing in eating the forbidden fruit and then tempting Adam to eat it. All in all, the women's image isn't too good in that particular book in the bible.
I feel that it isn't that big of a deal that the judge uses this book in the bible in court. It is a historical document. But, it isn't proven it's true. I personally think it is true so of course i lean towards the way of letting it be used. But not all people think so. It's all faith. You have to believe that it's true, and that's not necessarily ok when you bring the law into it. The law should involve pure facts and hard evidence.