2nd period

Sorry for the delay. I've finished grading all your paragraphs and will return them tomorrow. You can correct over the weekend for an increased grade.

Considering I didn't put these up until almost 7, you only need to choose 5 to rewrite. It is important that you do them since they will be collected first thing tomorrow. Tell your friends.

Emily
Although, professional sports generate high revenues to support astronomical spending, professional athlete salaries drive high-ticket prices, exceed that of important government officials, and create a false sense of superiority.

Sonja
Although funding the NASA space program exceeds 16 billion dollars a year for the US, our daily lives are affected by their discoveries.

Olivia
In order to be more successful in the future, all high school students should be given individual laptops.
Maddie is da bomb
Although many types of processed foods can be ok for you, organic food is much healthier and better for humans to eat.
Lauren
Although television plays an important role in an average American’s life every day, it has a negative effect on a society because of the influence it has on our minds.
Hannah Banana
Do to the competitive nature of sports, athletes are tempted to use illegal performance enhancing drugs.
NAOMI!!!!
File sharing programs such s Limewire allow for illegal downloading while harming your computer and the music industry at large.
The life of several human children massacred, these babies that was aborted didn’t have the choice neither should you.-Genevieve
Luis T.
A lot of people think gta 4 is the worse game ever made in the history because it is really violent.


Austin
It is extremely important that we don’t let endangered species become extinct because we are the ones making them extinct.


Ryan Parkinson
Barack Obama recently won the Nobel peace prize but did not deserve it because he has yet to implement something beneficial to our country.

Carla Stauder
Having an extra period for study hall would benefit each student tremendously