I am what you would call a christian and have been my entire life, so of course, I do believe in creationism. But creationism should not be taught in school, nor evolution, I think that it should be up to the parent to decide what exactly their child believes and how that idea is presented. Or maybe it would be better if the school would teach both but tell the students that neither one has been proven or dis-proven. When I first heard of evolution it was in a class room and the teacher taught it to me as if it were scientifically true. Either way, teaching either should not be illegal. As for the word choice and grammar, although it is written very bland and often gets boring, that is the way it has to be for everyone to understand. What point would the bible have if it had to be explained to anyone?